Tuesday 10 March 2020

This Is Just To Say By Me And William Carlos Williams

Yes his name is William Carlos Williams
and we were using his poem idea and adding our own word and
we had to write about it when we were doing something naughty
when we were young.
The tricky part was sorting the text boxes on the poster.
The easy part was choosing the background.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Charlie, I'm Brooke from Tui Whanau, I liked what your blog was about!!

    Next time you can make it a little bit longer because I want to read more of it.
    I like all the colours. Keep up the good work and can't wait to see more.

    Could you comment on my blog?????

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    1. Thank-you for the comment
      Brooke
      Mā te wā
      Charlie

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  2. Hi my name is Demitrius and I like the way you chose your background on you poem because it stands out and it's colourful. I read that you liked the chocholate and it was so delicious and tasty. Next time maybe you can say who was angry at you like it could have been you dad or mum. When did you eat that delicious chocolate and did you eat the chocolate because you were hungry.

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